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So, I made a manga cover. First volume.

I have to start drawing the pages now. Oh, crap. I need to find that dAmn scanner cable. Seriously. It's like, gone. So I can't plug my scanner in.

I need a new one anyway, mine is old. My parents have had it for a while.

Anyone wanna tell me if Epson Perfection 1250 scanners are any good? I dunno. That's what I have. It looks old.

All right, you see four new characters here. The first one is the girl in profile. That's Her Lady Demonic. She's the reason the demons have begun battling the angels. She's been kidnapped and she's getting weaker. The gil with the low opacity is Ivanna. She's an angel girl. The girl right under her is her transformatuion, the angel Sarlei. Humans call her BrightLight. They're corny. And the man? He's the devil. His name is - what else? - Lucifer. He's the 'good guy' of the manga, in the essence that he's the Black Stars' mentor. The demons (Dejavu, etc.) are his friends, and he chose them personally on behaviour and power to fight the Angels (like Sarlei/BrightLight).

get it?

...what's that? Clear as mud?

Too bad.

Gusy! PLEASE critique this before I color it.

Oh yeah.

All characters (c) Me :iconarchstormangel:

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:iconkrysie:
Starting your own little manga? :3 Good for you!

The only things that are glaringly obvious to me is the girl in the bottom left, her eyebrow probably shouldn't be visible and her nose seems a little too far over.

The guy above the girl on the bottom right, his head seems a little..shaped oddly. I dunno. =/

I like it, otherwise. <3
:iconarchstormangel:
Ah, yeah, most people agree that her eyebrow shouldn't be seen. haha. And I didn't notice the nose, I'll fix that!

And you're not the only one. I think that guy is just generally ugly. Let's just say he's malformed or something. xDD

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I do have a life, thank you. I'm reading it right now - HARRY POTTER.
<3
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:iconrackellenn:
I like it. No smudges and no BIG UGLY MISTAKES!!! Meanin' its a good cover so go color it!!!

Did you do this with pen? -if so, your WAY talented~

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This is my phone. You have no right to call it. -Vincent Valentine
:iconarchstormangel:
Haha, no. I drew it in pencil, scanned it, and lined it with the brush tool. Not that talented. And thankies!

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I do have a life, thank you. I'm reading it right now - HARRY POTTER.
<3
[link] < Group Ante Manga-ka
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^Groups.
:iconrackellenn:
Oh... Well just as good! welcome~

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This is my phone. You have no right to call it. -Vincent Valentine

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